Sleeping Valor

He rounded a corner and strode down a small alley way that would of only fit went over the plan in his head. Sorry, but this phrase was a bit ...

This is cute. I like how you simplified the narration to make us feel like it's coming from an animal. (not that I think cat's are simple minded. >_> No ...

Hmmmm. Ok, having read Holly Black's book Tithe, your first idea seems used to me (in the book the girl is a changeling and the only reason she doesn't know ...

o_O I can't even visualize the chaos. Don't do it! >.< I love the site the way it is. Four clicks isn't going to kill anyone. Besides, you'd drive people ...

Oh wow. You went and dug this up from the bottom of the pile. =P I actually did continue this (over some 46+ pages >.

Well if you can't do that, then I'd say use 'sexual favors'. Because in the end, that's what's in the story, right? How's it going to scare them off any ...

I haven't read it (though I think I saw it on this site, is it still up?), but have you considered just saying 'favors'?

As was mentioned above, you do have a couple cliche elements, but you combine them into something original and that's really what's important because these days almost everything has been ...

Immediately after the words leave her tongue, she regrets them. Damn! She has made a terrible mistake. You changed perspective for a second there. =P This is pretty cool. I ...

If you go to 'My YWS' and scroll down, then you will see 'My Portfolio'. If you click there it will show you work you have posted and also the ...

Definitely not cliched. It sounds pretty original. ^_^ Best of luck.

I have that problem too! I think somethings up. >.< I had to do it all manually. =P

Winds sounded and fearful screams were on the tip on hundreds of tongues. Dark energy concentrated [s]onto[/s] in the palm of a shady and gloomy figure. He twirled his hands ...

^_^ Welcome! You picked the right place to be, this is a great community. *gasp* We like writing? Who told you our secret?? =P I like fantasy alot, what do ...

>.< This sounds like such a great idea, but I only speak French (fluently, mind you) =P Hope you find someone!